Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26084508-20151019135627/@comment-26091443-20151019164735

Lame. I've thought for awhile that Nakaba was very good at handling long term plots and foreshadowing while also neglecting details in the now. It's just that this is the first time it's really bothered me. The sad part is that if he had done it just a little bit differently I'd be okay with this, but as it is now, the Zhivago thing really detracts from my enjoyment of the chapter.