Thread:Roboartitec/@comment-3030647-20160202002433/@comment-4556650-20160202134548

Hey Ash!

That is one really well detailed and organised plan, and you are completely correct to say that we need to update our articles.


 * Your overview paragraph is concise and precise~
 * "Great Knight" typo?
 * the second clause of the first sentence needs some re-phrasing (, and having)
 * maybe change he to the latter to clearly refer to Meliodas who was not in possession of......
 * my memory is kinda poor - did King observe Gilthunder's magic power, strength or just overall power?
 * For Combat Prowess... I'd prefer bullet points to only be used for listing phrases and not chunks of text. But you could try since I have no idea how it would turn out.
 * In the weapon section, maybe some details regarding how the character uses any weapon/equipment in conjunction with their ability? (e.g. channeling lightning, enveloped in electricity)
 * For the abilities section, we tend to put the majority of information in their own pages, but I do agree that it's a little bit short.
 * For the Power Level sub-section, I suppose it'll be alright to just stick in a bullet point list like Meliodas' page.

Take your time, this is one of those processes that requires lots of contemplating and preparation.

Speaking about abilities, there's another thing I've considered for quite a long time and always forgotten to try implementing; if you've read the Official Fanbook, you might notice 魔法消費量 which is basically Magic/Magical Power Consumption. (Of course, this would be placed in the ability pages and not character pages)

Looking forward to hearing from ya mate~